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Jeannine Lawall's avatar

I think the second description. Sounds better. It seems cleaner and more concise.

And I can't wait to order your new boom on July 4th!

Susanna Sullivan Author's avatar

Thanks for the response, Jeannine.

Actually, I’m getting ready to send out an update to yesterday’s newsletter. There was a SNAFU with Amazon, and the date’s been pushed back to July 6. The best-laid plans. . .